Critiques Anyone?

[SaltySupreme]

My horrible attempt at realism. If you're wondering about the unrealistic colors, it is my dA friend's OC.


If anyone cares, I have a dA too: http://thefelinelife.deviantart.com/

[LaceyPip]

I love it, its original and very cute 

[Shay]

Nice job

[Resolve]

I Find it very cute

[⁑Losergoddess⁑]

This looks like it should be part of a children's book or maybe an animated short o.o. Nice job

[Fatigue]

Good, But branches don't work like that. Google some guides, neither do leaves. Use different "dappled" shades. Use a darker outline because the front legs are invisible. Also a cat would be unable to sit like that on anything short of a plank. Changing the position might help. Other than that the shading and coloring is very good!

[SaltySupreme]

Good, But branches don't work like that. Google some guides, neither do leaves. Use different "dappled" shades. Use a darker outline because the front legs are invisible. Also a cat would be unable to sit like that on anything short of a plank. Changing the position might help. Other than that the shading and coloring is very good!

Thank you for the critique~! ^^


Also, thank you all for the kind comments on it.

[☠EvilTouch☠]

This looks like it should be part of a children's book or maybe an animated short o.o. Nice job

i agree with Mord here, it looks like an image taken out of those children books with stories or wateva...
keep working on it you never know what future holds for you 

[SaltySupreme]

Instead of creating a new thread for this, I'm recycling the old one. I have another realism I'd like critiqued. ^^
I have a speedpaint of this but I need to edit it and put it on YouTube.

[JHIN]

i like it. the colors are pleasing to the eyes and the way you drew maybe a bit different but it's your style and it has a 3d feel to it. like the cat before it looks like it would go well with a children's book and stuff.  nice work hope to see more in the future.

[Sleep]

I like that. Very colorful and vibrant. It's almost exciting to look at.

You should definitely look into Children's book illustration. You'd be making bank.

[Scwerz]

WOW its really beautiful i like it

[eel stirfry]

Instead of creating a new thread for this, I'm recycling the old one. I have another realism I'd like critiqued. ^^
I have a speedpaint of this but I need to edit it and put it on YouTube.

It's really nice overall.

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The shading yellowly smudged on the wings is a bit wonky.
Also, the outline of the wing has rough-uneven spots.
The lines on your fur are a bit too overly uniform and straight and they are just that-light and dark lines that imply fur...and are all the same size. If you varied the line size a bit more and made more shade/light differences would probably be better IMO at least.
Overall the shading is pretty good, but you should try shading the fur more in spots that feel like it needs it and in darker tones. This goes for the mountains, too since its mostly defined in darkish streaks-you could shade more parts in darker, cell shade etc.
The bright cirlcely spots around the fires are kinda unrealistic, as well as the one around the moon/lightsource..You could smudge a bit more with a big brush around edges, blur, idk..if your using photoshop, gaussian blur filter and put the light on a seperate layer?
The stars are kind of plain (i think they are stars if im wrong correct me plz). More "sparkle" could be added I guess.
It is pretty good but it could still be improved. And yeah, the colours are pretty colourful and vibrant which makes it pop :3
I'm not a pro, so just ignore my comments if you want to.

Kinda offtopic:

I like that. Very colorful and vibrant. It's almost exciting to look at.

You should definitely look into Children's book illustration. You'd be making bank.

So if she did it, she would build a bank?

[SaltySupreme]

Thanks for all the kind comments~! ^^

@EvilEye: Thank you for the critique~! :3

[eel stirfry]

Thanks for all the kind comments~! ^^

@EvilEye: Thank you for the critique~! :3

You accepted all responsibility for opening my spoilers ;-; And if anyone else does they accept responsibility as well. So don't complain about harshness (IK you didn't q.q)