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Offline SaltySupreme

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My horrible attempt at realism. If you're wondering about the unrealistic colors, it is my dA friend's OC.


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Last Edit: May 19, 2013, 07:52 pm by TheFelineLife
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I love it, its original and very cute  ;)

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I Find it very cute


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This looks like it should be part of a children's book or maybe an animated short o.o. Nice job
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Good, But branches don't work like that. Google some guides, neither do leaves. Use different "dappled" shades. Use a darker outline because the front legs are invisible. Also a cat would be unable to sit like that on anything short of a plank. Changing the position might help. Other than that the shading and coloring is very good!

Offline SaltySupreme

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Good, But branches don't work like that. Google some guides, neither do leaves. Use different "dappled" shades. Use a darker outline because the front legs are invisible. Also a cat would be unable to sit like that on anything short of a plank. Changing the position might help. Other than that the shading and coloring is very good!

Thank you for the critique~! ^^


Also, thank you all for the kind comments on it.
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This looks like it should be part of a children's book or maybe an animated short o.o. Nice job

i agree with Mord here, it looks like an image taken out of those children books with stories or wateva...
keep working on it :D you never know what future holds for you  :-\

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Instead of creating a new thread for this, I'm recycling the old one. I have another realism I'd like critiqued. ^^
I have a speedpaint of this but I need to edit it and put it on YouTube.
Last Edit: July 13, 2013, 12:18 am by TheFelineLife
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Offline JHIN

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i like it. the colors are pleasing to the eyes and the way you drew maybe a bit different but it's your style and it has a 3d feel to it. like the cat before it looks like it would go well with a children's book and stuff.  nice work hope to see more in the future.
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I like that. Very colorful and vibrant. It's almost exciting to look at.

You should definitely look into Children's book illustration. You'd be making bank.


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WOW its really beautiful i like it :)

Offline ☣EvilEye23☣

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Instead of creating a new thread for this, I'm recycling the old one. I have another realism I'd like critiqued. ^^
I have a speedpaint of this but I need to edit it and put it on YouTube.

It's really nice overall. :D

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I like that. Very colorful and vibrant. It's almost exciting to look at.

You should definitely look into Children's book illustration. You'd be making bank.

So if she did it, she would build a bank? :o
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Offline SaltySupreme

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Thanks for all the kind comments~! ^^

@EvilEye: Thank you for the critique~! :3
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Thanks for all the kind comments~! ^^

@EvilEye: Thank you for the critique~! :3


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