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Offline Evane

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I'd like to share one of my poems. It's a bit creepy but enjoy it hehe

Death of a Neighbor
 
My babe!    
My beloved son!  
A man goes, a man comes
Women gather, women depart
All in black, and many red eyes
People whisper, people scream
BRING MY FATHER BACK! She shrieks –
Moment of silence – hearts
Are beating faster
Than a DJ speaker.
Wooden cage's corner emerges
Clamour of voices reawakens
In white delivered
Voices amplify
Nothing makes sense
It's all uncanny and mystifying
Sounds are fusing, coalescing  
D A F E G
E string is playing
A sweet intense yet sorrowful melody
Pleases a heart of a spectator.    
 
I join the melody
From behind the blinds  
G string in a background
Of a mad violin masterpiece:
G A B C D D C B A G
I reached my insanity.



Offline Atemwende

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Verily poetic vichyssoise of metaphorical verbosity from my #1 postmodernist girl

'D A F E G ' is a line which I can personally and with conviction say, that resonates within me, on a personal, and awesome level.  ;)

Offline turessi

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loved it :-* :-* :-* :-* 
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Offline ᴋᴀʏᴅᴇɴ

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Nice Poem xD  ;D

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Offline Evane

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Verily poetic vichyssoise of metaphorical verbosity from my #1 postmodernist girl

'D A F E G ' is a line which I can personally and with conviction say, that resonates within me, on a personal, and awesome level.  ;)
I can only wish that the second part of the poem does not resonate within u like that line. 
Ty favorite modernist 
loved it :-* :-* :-* :-*
support for my g
Glad u loved it  :-*  :-*

Nice Poem xD  ;D
Thanks  :)
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You're lucky I let u comment on my thread

Offline X_KyIe_X

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I saw this and shitted bricks, you know why. Good work keep it up :D