Aw practice makes perfect! I would definitely keep up the writing though, it's very good!
Thanks for the good read, I really find it cute.Can you try writing a sad story about brothers loving and wanting the same girl. I think it will be a good practice for you if you will make the ending so sad that the readers will cry. hehehe, just wanna see it.
waiting patiently for my lovely
Long time ago, in a small but beautiful kingdom lived a young king named Milan, beloved by his people, and his wife, named Shania. They didn’t rule the kingdom for too long but it became growing bigger and more beautiful than ever. Everyone believed in their king and queen and loved them from the bottom of their hearts, hoping for their long reign and happiness. But so did some of the court ladies who hoped to become the king’s mistresses and offer him a reign as rumors said the queen could not become pregnant. Sadly, for them, the king truly loved his wife. Not long after the last lady tried her luck a new lady was hired as the Queen’s maid named Leyla. She was a beautiful young lady who’s parents died and was raised by her grandmother, a vicious woman who would do anything for rank and money and sadly, that’s what she teach her granddaughter to do. Leyla became good friend with the Queen, making sure she tells only good things about herself to the king, her power over the other ladies growing over time. She became a good confident for the king in the times of need. “My Queen, Leyla,, what should I do? Our crops aren’t good this year. Some villages don’t even have any supplies left….” Said the King, sad. “Your Majesty, we could send them supplies from our castle. I know we have more than enough to go through the winter. Plus, there are some villages that sent their help also. Being so busy, Your Majesty couldn’t talk to their Lords but Her Majesty, the Queen, did.” Said Leyla. “It is true, my beloved. A few lords came the other day and told me they have enough corps for the winter and they’d like to help others but they asked for help to transport it. If what they offer is not enough we can add more from us. We still have crops from the years before.” Said the Queen gently touching the King’s arm. “Thank you” said the King. “Both of you.” Reaching to Leyla’s hand also. The Queen started to notice the affection between her husband and Leyla but kept believing in their love. Thanks to the advice from them everyone went through the winter without any problems and the people loved their King even more for his love to the people and not the richness of being a king. During a lovely spring day the Queen went to visit the beautiful gardens in another city of the country but without her maid, Leyla who decided to stay in case there is need of her. But as soon as she said her good byes to the Queen and the other court ladies she started spending more and more time with the King. “King Milan, isn’t the Queen Shania gone for too long? I can assume you are feeling lonely without her by your side” said Lyla. “She really loves that place after all, it’s where she grew up for a few years and where we first met. She makes sure everyone takes good care of that garden. But yes you’re right, sometimes I do feel lonely.” Said the King with a smile on his face but his eyes with sadness. “Wouldn’t you like some company at night, my King? I would gladly take her place if that’s what you wish for. I could offer what she never did, a heir.” Said Lyla with a seductive tone. Without knowing, the Queen came back, wanting to surprise Milan and good thing she did as she could hear their conversation, tears falling down her face from the betrayal of her friend. She wanted to know her husband’s replay but didn’t know if she could handle it. “How dare you imply such things?!” said the King angry. “Shania trusted you as her friend and I trust you! If you didn’t know by now I love my wife, she may not be perfect but for me she is. You have deceived us and this kingdom! Get out and never come back!” shouted the King to Leyla. Scared and crying she ran out but stopped as soon as she saw the Queen standing there crying and smiling so beautifully. “Shania, my love, you’re back!” said the King, smiling and his anger going away. “Yes my beloved. I’m so happy for what you said.” Said the Queen, entering his office and taking his hands. “And I have good news for you, my king. I delayed my return for you because I’m pregnant.” Speechless, the King hugged his wife and kissed her on her forehead, lifting her up and dancing like they never did before.
Add Nia's story. c: After long time
most lovely and marvelous writingthank you
your boy a playa : )
