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Creating a song, Need feedback please ^^

Offline ZomV

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So I started on a new track a few days ago, and would like some feedback please.



Genre = EDM/Metal
Track (Demo): https://clyp.it/wiu3yxjd
The first half would be the intro. I'm still currently working on that part, need to add more stuff. The second half would be the second drop. The second drop would be towards the ending of the song.

Thanks!

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It's great, but I don't really think you should put it on 'metal' genre, it's nothing close to metal.
It's not dubstep, but it's like the remixes they do, still pretty cool though, good luck finishing it!

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I liked the intro alot but didn't really like the drop intro had a nice build up though 

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Needs more cowbell.

No but seriously.
Starting at 00:19 it seems a little off beat and dragging.
At 00:28 I personally would add a drum beat to help it build, kind of how you have in the second half.
Starting at 01:06 to the end seems a bit repetitive, maybe add something, like more keyboard.
Just my opinions though, you can ignore.

It is really good though! That program is so much fun to just mess around with.

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bass drop was weak

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Same^^
I liked the intro alot but didn't really like the drop intro had a nice build up though
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I liked the intro alot but didn't really like the drop intro had a nice build up though
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imo the 1st sound after the build up should have kicked me off the chair cuz the build up was amazing but u lost it with that flanger/scratch
u should turn to drum'n'bass cuz ur style reminds me of pendulum
the idea is nice, listen to these add some bass in ur demo 
u sure have a talent just use it well  :police: