[shadow=red,left]"Are you ready?" the old shaman, said with a grin.I felt my heart trembling, wait, why do I tremble. Am I afraid? I don't know the word fear.This will be the end. All of it, will end here. At last, I will be at peace. No one will ever disturb me again."Let us begin then."As the shaman begun the ritual rites, I didn't move. I am smiling. Fear of dying is out of my mind. Now, will be the time that my soul shall be put to sleep. The time that my consciousness shall disappear."The powerful being of the damned, for his soul is most corrupted, shall be put to rest for eternity." "Heed my words almighty God of the heavens, to seal the demon that sits in front of me.""His name shall not be forgotten, the name that carved fear into the human realm.""But this is the moment he shall be vanish before the light of the almighty""Seal the soul, Demon of all demons, Satan!"As he shouted that name, I grew weaker and weaker, I knew that moment, the time has come.Never shall my name be feared by all, nor my powers shall condemn all that lives. I now rest in the sands of time, forever. It will all turn blank for me. I will have my eternal sleep. Then my soul turned into nothingness.[/shadow][shadow=red,left]This is an excerpt to my upcoming story. I hope you'll like it. Also, any suggestions, corrections or violent reactions, are welcome. I want to improve my writing skills using English. TYVM [/shadow][shadow=red,left]~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~[/shadow][shadow=red,left]I started the story already and had just finished chapter 1 and posted it in wattpad [/shadow] http://www.wattpad.com/story/33943497-the-demon-king[shadow=red,left]Any constructive criticisms and suggestions are very welcome. TY[/shadow]