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Diamond Dog, A rap i told him i would write for him 30mins ago.

Offline ShallowGrave

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Hello everyone It's ShallowGrave Again
I told my Good friend Diamond Dog
I would write a forum rap post about him using
This
Diamond Dog (Sin) Skill:  Share The Stealth
DogEyes (Seeker) Skill: Radiant Eye
MokoLoko (Archer) Skill: Barrage of arrows
Let's see how I did shall we,
this was written within 30mins of telling him I would do so.

  Diamond Dog
I seen you waiting in the yard
the players be thinking your a big fat
fraud I don't know where you went wrong
but your Dog Eyes be looking at me
trying to understand what this all means
while MokoLoko is flying amongst the air
throwing barrage of arrows up like he doesn't
care I wanted you to share the stealth
But I guess it wouldn't have helped cause
your radiant eye was pushed to the side
now I'm being hit with all the lies
that you kept on the in side
that makes any friendship die
I wish I knew where your loyalty lied
is it with your guild or your friends
I just want to know when will this tragedy end.

Offline Bill Dipperly

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wow u are Lil Wayne #2

Offline ╭∩╮(︶︿︶)MokoLoko

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idk what to say xD but man you're sooo COOL :normal-42: :normal-42:

crazy how Savagery shit on you

Offline Dendoora☆

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Gj hun ♥ proud of ya, as always

Offline Omni

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wow u are Lil Wayne #2
Ikr.

You're really good!

Offline Ɗҽʂιɠɳҽɾ

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loooooooooooooooool

2pac stil alive ;)

Offline Bre.

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Any autotune? And go T-Pain.

[16:47:01] Bre: this creeps me out.
[16:47:32] Zilara: Lmfaoo

Offline Subsea

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Sin : SCOOP / Master     
Barb: Global     
Archer: Deoxy
BMs : Scrubsea / Subsea

Opulence

Now sing over skype sir. Pls ty.

Offline Dendoora☆

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Now sing over skype sir. Pls ty.
he sing for me first ;o

Offline Omni

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Now sing over skype sir. Pls ty.

Offline HolaAmigos:)

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no sound is not rap

Offline Unicorn2

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  • My advice to you, my violent friend, is to seek out gold and sit on it.
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[9:53:42 AM] Matty: FACTOR ALPHA UNICORN WANTS ME TO RUB HER HORN OH MY GOD
[9:54:05 AM] ♥: Yes, my Dear One. Rub it, and rub it good.

Offline HellishKitty

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it was a pretty basic rhyme scheme but I liked the last few bars u wrote


GRADE: C