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Thanks for the reply and the suggestions. I wrote that on a whim and half asleep, so it doesn't surprise me that it has errors in it. Still, no excuses. It wasn't my intent to turn it into a slasher fic, but with Pyramid Head being such a visceral character, I figured a nod towards the movie was appropriate. As for Pyramid Head eating people, I don't know. All I know is that he was a personification of fear, regret, and shame. It would not surprise if he did eat people, that was just an assumption on my behalf, probably false, though. Implementing Silent Hill into Perfect World would be hard, because Silent Hill differs from person to person. If you have played any of the Silent Hill games, it alludes to the person's inner demons or a curse put upon them. As for the protagonist running, that didn't really occur to me because, I mean, hey, here's this guy, taller than me, blocking all exits, spells don't work, and oh shit now I have no wings. That was my mind set. Plus, I like gore, so that is personal preference. Doesn't work for everybody and that's absolutely fine. That's what I like about writing: it can be viewed so many different ways and through critiques and suggestions does the writer become better. So, thanks again. ^_^