Poet Corner

[Jammy]

Been sippin' on apple juice past 3 mins thinkin', it would be nice to see just how much of the things I'm fond of in life I can find within the people on this server, and this sprung to mind. Share your poems with me! I love poetic things, they excite meeee.

Here's one I wrote a while back

As the tears roll down my weary face
Red from the duration of pain I suffered
I blink to visualise my bearings
Through watery eyes I see as best as I can

Determinedly stepping through the barrier
Once held in place for the protection of my wellbeing
My mentality is on ice, facing its fear of the hell that lies below
Is this what it takes to be a man?

I step blindly and boldly
Braving my own storm, I traverse weary of my own strength
Treating each step as my last to be had
I tread with the utmost care

The harsh storm batters me side to side
With fierce tears from years of resilience
The wails of a forlorn soul bitter with vexation
Left for dead asphyxiating in its own dispair

The hellbent wind jostling me violently
The blizzard, infiltrating my skin and my mind
Attacking me and hastily infecting me with hate
I swell up with anger and heartfelt emotion

I bury my frosted head into my chest and shield my eyes
Marching on as a soldier would
Defiant of the likely outcome I pursue what I believe to be the cause
Of my deep-rooted evil with otherworldly devotion...

The storm abruptly succumbs to my endeavor
I near the end of the road, feeling my body disintergrate
Slowly into a void of non-existence
As I slowly begin to calmly resurface my shielded face

The wailing of the wandering soul
Dies down to utter silence, leaving behind a frozen vessel
Standing tall, complaisant, content
In this battlefield turned vast, empty, inescapable space

I disappear within a second, fading
Into the atmosphere I can only describe as
The dark side of my mentality, as I gaze into the mirror
The mirror of my soul, through my penetrating eyes

'Walked through another storm' I utter to myself
As I entered into the frozen Devil's lair I staggered to the other side
And exited a colder individual, with the mental scars all over
Blanketed in a shield of determination, I continue the path of life

[Archeus]

I suck at poems QQ but I like yours

[C]

Why do I have this sneaking suspicion this is stolen from google

[Ultimate]

That is definitly from google search...................

[C]

Or off of some poetry site, man..
Ya never know.

[C]

http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/walking-through-the-storm/

plagiarism is a sue-able crime, Sir.

[Jammy]

LOL QQ that IS me, I like to upload stuff to the net it's easier to find since everything I do I'm always losing

[Jammy]

Well this got off to a bad start -__-

[C]

the author has an asian last name. you don't appear asian

[Jammy]

the author has an asian last name. you don't appear asian

[Jammy]

I guess... no1 likes poetry ._.

[DrakeX]

I guess... no1 likes poetry ._.

You are unfortunately at the wrong adress here :/
Here only exists Flame, QQ and hate. MUCH hate

[Jammy]

You are unfortunately at the wrong adress here :/
Here only exists Flame, QQ and hate. MUCH hate

D: Poetry is beautiful! Needs more loving, and less putting aside! But I guess, that's just me ;(

[Lan]

Good words man...Just lots of children here.  Not many adults or mature players read forums and chat.  Its just ppl trying to up their post counts by being jerks and commenting on everything.  There are some happy exceptions of course...it is what it is.

Here's a song of me:

The things that I think and do are things that become seen by you, but this is after an instance of remittance as we pass in this crass situation of life and liberty leaning me through the next phase as I fall forward onto myself 10 years from now only to jump back shocked and see 10 years ago again through the rhymes you see and the photos that be. 
 
Consistent
Congruity
Chastise
Chaos
Causing
Cracks
Correspondingly
Crawling
Contextually
Cornered
(In my) Cortex
Combining
Cinema
Collapsing
Calmly
 

[Jammy]

Good words man...Just lots of children here.  Not many adults or mature players read forums and chat.  Its just ppl trying to up their post counts by being jerks and commenting on everything.  There are some happy exceptions of course...it is what it is.

Here's a song of me:

The things that I think and do are things that become seen by you, but this is after an instance of remittance as we pass in this crass situation of life and liberty leaning me through the next phase as I fall forward onto myself 10 years from now only to jump back shocked and see 10 years ago again through the rhymes you see and the photos that be. 
 
Consistent
Congruity
Chastise
Chaos
Causing
Cracks
Correspondingly
Crawling
Contextually
Cornered
(In my) Cortex
Combining
Cinema
Collapsing
Calmly

I guess so man, quick to comment negativity but disappear within a second afterwards, and reading that out was actually very enjoyable and calming do you have any more sir?